The Fly
ACT I — PAGES
EXT. CAIRO PORT – NIGHT
Fog thick as wool swallows the harbour. FLOODLIGHTS rake the water, glancing off a tanker’s black hull.
On the quay, ABDUL and his crew move like ghosts with swagger — fake papers, forced smiles, real pistols under jackets. Debt collection, not for banks.
A WOODEN CRATE sits lashed to a HUMVEE roof rack. Plain. Corners scuffed. Steel straps biting into the grain.
One detail: a CURLING GLYPH carved deep into the wood—a symbol of ancient retribution, scarred like an old wound.
A FLY lands on it.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – NIGHT
Cold blue light. A bunker of monitors and tired people.
ON SCREEN: compound-eye POV of the crate’s surface. A micro-drone “fly” purrs as it digs in, but its feed glitches faintly—battery at 78%, wind shear warning.
LEAD OPERATOR
Visual confirm — asset’s attached. Battery's dipping; we might lose it in high winds.
JULES (OPERATOR #2)
(half-smile, masking worry)
Then let's hope our little spy doesn't get airsick before showtime.
RF TECH
Priorities: plot the route now. Name it if it survives.
The HUMVEE pulls away, swallowed by Cairo’s midnight.
INT. PRINCE KHALID’S PALACE – GULF – NIGHT
Silk, marble, shadow. PRINCE KHALID BIN HAZAR (40s) watches FOUR NEWS FEEDS at once. He traces the GLYPH in condensation on a glass— the same mark that scarred his brother's casket after a U.S. drone strike years ago, a "collateral" error in a forgotten war.
PRINCE
(soft, certain)
One act. One lesson. For what they took.
An AIDE nods from the shadows, handing him a file: redacted CIA reports linking the glyph to his family's vendetta.
INT. OVAL OFFICE – MORNING
The PRESIDENT (60s) stands over a yellow legal pad. The CHIEF OF STAFF waits, glancing at protest alerts on his phone—demonstrations already brewing outside the White House.
PRESIDENT
We open with hope. Always hope.
CHIEF OF STAFF
Hope, then teeth. But the polls are fracturing—unions love the factories, but civil liberties groups are calling for impeachment before you even speak.
PRESIDENT
Troops home. Factories back. Fifty-dollar electric cars. Legal cannabis — districts only.
Beat.
PRESIDENT (CONT’D)
Then we tell them we’re suspending Congress. Live trials. Six months. Clean slate. If they riot, we contain it. No martyrs.
CHIEF OF STAFF
They’ll call it a coup. And the military? Half might stand down; the other half...
PRESIDENT
We bet on the half that remembers why they enlisted.
INT. SUBWAY CAR – MORNING
The PRESIDENT’S DAUGHTER (22), book in lap, watches congressionals argue on phones amid commuters muttering about "dictator talk." She texts: “I got a gallery pass.” A bubble appears: Dad: Proud of you. Stay near exits—and watch the crowds.
She rolls her eyes, but her smile fades as she overhears a heated debate nearby: "He's saving us" vs. "He's ending us."
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – NIGHT
Maps crawl with data. The WIRE TRANSFER screen shows anonymized hops — then a flagged alias: KH. HAZAR HOLDINGS.
LEAD OPERATOR
Payment lives. Prince’s shell. Ties back to that drone op in '18—his brother's death.
JULES
Guilt with a grudge. Explains the glyph.
RF TECH
Focus. Wind's picking up—feed's unstable.
ON SCREEN: The fly rides a gust — the image skews, static bursts, battery drops to 62%.
JULES
(tense, no quip)
Stabilize... please.
The image holds, barely.
EXT. BORDER CHECKPOINT – NIGHT
The HUMVEE slows. Guards circle. Abdul keeps his smile fixed.
A GUARD runs a wand along the crate. It crackles — then quiets. He shrugs, waves them through.
The fly shudders but clings.
INT. SENATE CHAMBER – DAY
A hum of anticipation. Cameras on rails. PACKED GALLERIES, with protesters visible outside windows. The DAUGHTER finds her seat, scans for her father, noting extra security.
INT. OVAL OFFICE – CONTINUOUS
The President straightens his tie. A mirror reveals a farmer’s shoulders in a city suit.
CHIEF OF STAFF
Last chance to dial it back. Protests are swelling—Chicago's on edge.
PRESIDENT
I didn't blink plowing forty acres in a dust storm. Won't start now.
MONTAGE — THE ANNOUNCEMENT
— The President at the podium: plain words, big promises.
— Defense analysts side-eying TVs in windowless rooms, murmuring about loyalty oaths.
— A factory floor lighting up; workers cheer, but cut to riots in D.C., tear gas blooming.
— Commentators frothing; markets jitter; online backlash trends: #AmericanCoup.
— Prince watching, unreadable, fingering a photo of his brother.
PRESIDENT (V.O.)
…not a coup. An intermission. Six months. Then you decide who speaks for you. But know this: sabotage from abroad or within ends today.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – NIGHT
LEAD OPERATOR
We hold position. No interdiction until the lid comes off. But if the fly fails...
JULES
Then we pivot to backups. Sat imagery's fuzzy in those mountains.
LEAD OPERATOR
Pray we don't need to.
Jules nods, her smirk gone—real fear now.
EXT. COAST ROAD – DAWN
The HUMVEE knifes along a crumbling cliff road. A crosswind hammers it. The fly shudders, peels—battery at 41%—clings by a thread.
JULES (V.O.)
Hang in there. We've got stakes too high for glitches.
INT. PRESIDENT’S TOWNHOUSE – NIGHT
Quiet. The President sits with a cold coffee, stares at a photo of his DAUGHTER at twelve, missing teeth and holding a science fair ribbon. News plays: protests turning violent in multiple cities.
He dials.
PRESIDENT
(soft)
Be proud. Be careful. And if things go south... trust your gut, not the crowds.
He hangs up without a message.
INT. PRINCE’S PALACE – NIGHT
Prince pulls a slim transmitter from a velvet box. A simple button. He does not press it. He places it near an antique mantel CLOCK, whispering to his aide.
PRINCE
My brother died because they played god with drones. Now they learn: every empire has its clock.
EXT. LEBANESE ROAD – NIGHT
The HUMVEE snakes past militia checkpoints. Abdul keeps receipts like a professional, but glances nervously at the crate.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – NIGHT (LATER)
RF TECH
Supply chain bribes logged. If this goes to court, it’ll be a textbook. But with protests escalating stateside...
JULES
We focus here. No distractions.
LEAD OPERATOR
Eyes front. We break into Two on wheels.
The HUMVEE veers toward a freeway.
SMASH TO BLACK.
— END ACT I —
ACT II — Expanded Connective Scenes
SEQUENCE 6 — PROMISE OF THE PREMISE
(pp. 31–50 — Trials in full swing, political spectacle, operators shadowing Prince’s plan)
INT. SENATE CHAMBER – DAY
GAVEL cracks. The first defendant — a former Senator — shuffles to the witness table. Cameras snap; the air feels like theatre more than justice, with chants audible from outside.
In the gallery, the PRESIDENT’S DAUGHTER scribbles notes. She notices: the Senators aren’t looking at the audience — they’re watching the cameras. Her phone buzzes: anonymous tip about "foreign interference in the trials."
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – SAME
Jules flicks through broadcast feeds, cross-referencing with location pings. The fly’s still with the Humvee, now creeping into mountain passes, feed flickering—battery at 29%.
JULES
They're dragging this route. Stalling for the U.S. chaos to peak, or syncing with the Prince's timeline.
LEAD OPERATOR
We monitor both. Cross-check sat pings if the fly drops.
RF TECH
Already on it. But ground truth is thinning—protests are jamming signals stateside too.
MONTAGE — AMERICA WATCHES (AND REACTS)
— Factory workers clustered around a breakroom TV, laughing at a Congressman’s stammer, but one mutters, "This fixes nothing if tanks roll in."
— A classroom where kids hold up “GUILTY” signs like a game show, teacher whispering about potential school shutdowns.
— Protests swelling: signs reading "Hope or Tyranny?" Clashes with police.
— The PRESIDENT in the Oval Office, watching with a straight face. His Chief of Staff glances at polling numbers climbing—but approval dipping in key states.
INT. PRINCE’S PALACE – NIGHT
Prince’s aides present trade forecasts: oil flows shifting from U.S. to China. He barely glances. His eyes are on the Senate broadcast — specifically, the wide shots that include the gallery clock—and news of U.S. unrest.
AIDE
The riots play into your hand, Highness. Their "intermission" fractures them.
PRINCE
Good. But the glyph demands precision. Not just chaos—consequence.
INT. PRESIDENT’S TOWNHOUSE – NIGHT
The President’s DAUGHTER Skypes her father, screen split with protest footage.
DAUGHTER
It’s addictive, Dad. Like a binge-watch. But outside... it's real. People are scared.
PRESIDENT
It's not entertainment. It's surgery. Messy, but necessary. Stay vigilant—intel suggests foreign eyes on the chamber.
DAUGHTER
You mean like that glyph thing from the old files?
PRESIDENT
(hesitant)
Just... be ready.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – NIGHT
The fly shivers as the Humvee pulls into a fuel yard. A diesel rig idles nearby — too close. Heat spike—feed warps, battery drains to 18%.
JULES
Optics frying. If we push harder, it cooks.
LEAD OPERATOR
Ride it out. We've lost assets before; adapt.
SEQUENCE 7 — FIRST PINCH
(pp. 51–55 — Surveillance scare, crate swap)
EXT. BORDER YARD – NIGHT
Floodlights cut through dust. The Humvee noses up beside a flatbed truck. Abdul hops out, greets a MAN IN BLACK. They pull tarps.
Two identical wooden crates appear.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – CONTINUOUS
JULES
Which is ours? Battery's critical—can't afford a misstep.
RF TECH
No trackers. Glyph depth on the original is deeper.
Jules zooms. Confirms.
JULES
That's it. But if they spot the fly...
The crates swap vehicles. The fly transfers—barely. A GUARD idly swats at it. Misses by millimeters. Feed stabilizes at 12%.
INT. PRINCE’S PALACE – SAME
Prince’s eyes narrow at the swap on a mirrored feed.
PRINCE
They cling like insects. Proceed to step two—let their hope blind them.
ACT II → ACT III — INTEGRATED CONTINUUM
INT. DHS LOADING DOCK – DAY (MIDPOINT)
A HUMVEE rolls in under ARMED ESCORT. AGENTS swarm the WOODEN CRATE, crack it open.
Inside: SHIELDED SCRAP METAL. Geiger counters SCREAM… then fall SILENT.
AGENT
It’s junk. Decoy.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – SAME
Banks of monitors. The “fly” feed POPS to life — no open road now, only VENTWORK. Battery at 8%—final warning.
JULES
We're inside. Not the road—the chamber vents.
She zooms: a HEAT BLOOM behind a BRASS GALLERY CLOCK.
LEAD OPERATOR
The real device's planted. He used the decoy to draw eyes away while embedding it during the chaos.
RF TECH
And with protests raging, evacuation would spark nationwide panic.
JULES
Finale time. But our fly's on fumes.
INT. SENATE CHAMBER – DAY
TRIALS in full roar. The PRESIDENT on the floor; DEFENDANTS blanched under giant screens of their own voices. Outside, sirens wail from escalating protests.
In the gallery: the PRESIDENT’S DAUGHTER watches, jaw tight, texting her dad: "Something feels off with the clock."
ATLAS, Secret Service, leans in.
ATLAS
(low)
Sir— device located. Behind the gallery clock. Protests are blocking clear evac routes.
The President looks up — one heartbeat only — at the clock.
PRESIDENT
We clear quietly? Without tipping the riots?
ATLAS
Risky. One wrong move, and the streets explode too.
INT. OVAL OFFICE SIDE CORRIDOR – MOMENTS LATER
The PRESIDENT and CHIEF OF STAFF walk fast, hushed, dodging aides with protest updates.
CHIEF OF STAFF
Evacuate and spin it as a drill—or keep going and risk it all. Polls say the trials are winning hearts, but a bomb...
PRESIDENT
My daughter's up there. But if we pull only VIPs, the country sees hypocrisy. We lose the narrative—and the streets.
CHIEF OF STAFF
Then we defuse in place. No other choice.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – SAME
RF bands ripple across screens.
RF TECH
Carrier at twenty-three point five above the audio floor, riding the broadcast. Backup’s the oscillator in the clock. Kill the feed— it arms. Kill the clock— it arms.
JULES
Can't mute the show or stop the ticking. Prince's revenge is poetic.
LEAD OPERATOR
We thread the gap. Engineering over elegance.
INT. CAPITOL — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE – DAY
MARA, bomb tech, kneels by a panel. JOEL hauls a pelican case.
MARA
We feather a null into the carrier. Gentle, or the watchdog bites.
JOEL
And the reed? Fly's barely alive.
MARA
If it holds, we use its wing to short it. Last resort.
INT. SENATE GALLERY – SAME
The DAUGHTER raises her phone, frames the chamber — the CLOCK prominent. She types “Dad, the clock's off-sync?” then deletes. Stays seated, eyes sharp.
INT. PRINCE KHALID’S PALACE – NIGHT
PRINCE watches FOUR FEEDS, including U.S. protest cams. His thumb hovers over a slim TRANSMITTER. The GLYPH inlaid at his feet.
PRINCE
They fracture themselves. Now, the punctuation.
An aide pushes in a wide shot of the chamber; the clock fills the frame.
INT. SENATE CHAMBER – DAY
The President returns to the mic, steady despite distant protest chants.
PRESIDENT
…we’ll not be ruled by money, and we will not bow to shadows from afar.
A faint TICK-TICK swells—or it's the tension.
Atlas’ eyes lock on the clock.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – CONTINUOUS
Thermal POV from the fly slides behind the grille: STEEL CASING, COIN-CELL PACK, a tiny REED SWITCH lacquered to a board. The GLYPH scratched into the backplate.
JULES
Internals acquired. Battery at 5%—this is it.
LEAD OPERATOR
Mara, prep the null. We carve a window.
RF TECH
Soft entry. Drop too sharp, and we're done.
INT. CAPITOL — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE – CONTINUOUS
Mara plugs a compact JAMMER. Thumb over the dial.
MARA
Feathering in. No shoves.
INT. PRINCE’S PALACE – NIGHT
Prince murmurs his brother’s name, eyes on the feed.
PRINCE
For the silence they forced on you.
He waits, patient.
INT. SENATE CHAMBER – CONTINUOUS
The PRESIDENT glances up at the clock—one more time.
ATLAS
We can extract your daughter quietly.
PRESIDENT
If we prioritize family over fairness, we're no better than them. We stand—or fall—together.
He finds his Daughter in the gallery. She meets his gaze, nods firmly.
INT. OPERATIONS ROOM – CONTINUOUS
LEAD OPERATOR
All stations— set condition COUNTDOWN.
TITLE CARD: THREE MINUTES
ACT III — FINALE (MINUTE-BY-MINUTE)
T-03:00 — SENATE CHAMBER (LIVE)
The room hums amid muffled outside chaos. The brass CLOCK presides. The President speaks; the nation leans in, split between support and fury.
ATLAS gets the whisper from his sleeve: device confirmed, behind clock.
T-02:52 — OPERATIONS ROOM
Spectrums bloom.
RF TECH
Carrier locked. Heartbeat code active.
LEAD OPERATOR
Mara, feather on three… two… one—now.
T-02:40 — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE
MARA
Engaging.
The spike wavers, steadies.
RF TECH (FILTERED)
Solid. Let it settle.
T-02:31 — PRINCE’S PALACE
Prince’s gaze sharpens on protest feeds merging with the chamber.
PRINCE
Deliver your defiance.
Thumb steady.
T-02:18 — SENATE CHAMBER
PRESIDENT
…we pause the rot, but not the people. Not the promise.
The clock’s second hand hitches faintly.
Atlas tenses.
T-01:59 — OPERATIONS ROOM
LEAD OPERATOR
Fly team—scrape the lacquer. Touch the reed lightly.
JULES
Threading it. Battery flickering—hurry.
ON SCREEN: the fly’s CARBON WING edges toward the REED SWITCH.
T-01:44 — VENT / CLOCK
SKRRK—a contact whisper. SPARK. ARMED light wavers.
JULES
It's noticing.
RF TECH
Push once more. Controlled.
T-01:30 — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE
MARA
Backup oscillator heating up.
RF TECH (FILTERED)
If carrier fails, clock takes over.
MARA
Then we steal its rhythm.
T-01:22 — PRINCE’S PALACE
The Prince presses the transmitter.
Pilot light IGNITES—ARMED.
PRINCE
Begin.
T-01:15 — SENATE CHAMBER
Gallery ripples with unease—protest noise leaking in. The DAUGHTER grips the rail. President steady.
PRESIDENT
(quiet, to Atlas)
Her first. Then the rest.
ATLAS
We'll get everyone.
T-01:06 — OPERATIONS ROOM
RF TECH
Arming live. Oscillator pristine.
LEAD OPERATOR
Mara—gas ready. Jules—reed again.
JULES
One last nudge. For all of us.
Fly presses.
T-00:59 — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE
MARA
Mark.
Hand on RED LEVER.
T-00:53 — PRINCE’S PALACE
Prince smiles at captions: “…suspend these institutions…”
T-00:49 — VENT / CLOCK
SCRAPE. SPARK. ARMED light stutters.
RF TECH (FILTERED)
Reed's unstable. Gate faltering.
LEAD OPERATOR
Keep it erratic.
T-00:41 — SENATE CHAMBER
President slows his words.
PRESIDENT
Saboteurs don't dictate our fate. Not with bombs, not with division.
Atlas' hand inches to his sidearm.
T-00:34 — OPERATIONS ROOM
RF TECH
Carrier dipping. Backup imminent.
LEAD OPERATOR
Heavy null in five.
T-00:27 — PRINCE’S PALACE
Prince taps transmitter redundantly.
PRINCE
Your choice ends here.
T-00:22 — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE
LEAD OPERATOR (FILTERED)
Heavy now.
MARA
Dialing up.
Carrier flattens—OSCILLATOR spikes.
RF TECH (FILTERED)
On backup. Clock's in play.
MARA
Breaking it.
T-00:18 — SENATE CHAMBER
INERT GAS whispers from vents. Murmurs rise. DAUGHTER scans, meets her father's eyes—stays composed.
T-00:15 — MAINTENANCE ALCOVE
MARA
Sprinklers in ten. Chaos beats crater.
JOEL
Ready.
T-00:12 — VENT / CLOCK
Fly GRINDS. Reed CHATTERS. ARMED blinks wildly.
JULES
(whisper)
Hold together...
T-00:10 — SENATE CHAMBER
PRESIDENT
To those watching abroad: your vendetta stops at our door.
Sprinklers THUNK. Water cascades. Gas veils.
T-00:06 — OPERATIONS ROOM
LEAD OPERATOR
Atlas—wait for signal.
ATLAS (FILTERED)
Affirm.
RF TECH
Timer hunting clean ticks.
LEAD OPERATOR
Deny them.
T-00:05 — SENATE CHAMBER
President unmoved by the deluge.
PRESIDENT
We write our own endings.
Nods—go.
T-00:03 — SENATE CHAMBER
ATLAS draws, fires TWO ROUNDS into the CLOCK.
CRACK. CRACK.
Glass SHATTERS. Gears GRIND to halt at XII.
Panic surges—shouts, lurching bodies.
T-00:02 — VENT / OPERATIONS ROOM
Oscillator STALLS. Logic LOOPS.
RF TECH
Holding... holding...
JULES
You did it.
T-00:01 — PRINCE’S PALACE
Prince mashes transmitter. Blank.
PRINCE
Impossible—
T-00:00 — EVERYWHERE
SILENCE.
Gas lingers. Sprinklers drip. President stands drenched, resolute.
LEAD OPERATOR (FILTERED)
Negative detonation. Device inert.
Ops Room exhales—relief, no cheers.
T+00:12 — SENATE CHAMBER
President at mic.
PRESIDENT
We're unbroken.
Points to shattered clock.
PRESIDENT (CONT’D)
Question every mechanism—every ritual—that claims to define us.
Finds DAUGHTER—alive, resolute. She nods.
PRESIDENT (CONT’D)
Clear the room. And the streets—we rebuild together.
Atlas escorts.
T+00:40 — OPERATIONS ROOM
Freeze on backplate GLYPH. Overlay: OLD CASE FILE, brother's drone strike.
LEAD OPERATOR
No boom, but he got his rehearsal. Protests as cover—next lesson's coming.
Hallway clocks quietly removed.
INT. PRINCE’S PALACE – NIGHT (LATER)
Prince opens window. REAL FLY escapes.
Sets transmitter down.
PRINCE
Lesson two: resilience is fleeting.
FADE OUT.
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